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as winter slowly approaches, i attempted to personify the seasons because i feel like they are all interconnected in a way that's beyond us, that is more personal than we can ever understand. there is a reason why one leads to another, and this is my take, albeit sentimental, on their individual faces.
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FAIRYTAIL1O1 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Student General Artist
Honestly this is still one of the best things i've ever read.
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Interestingly I had such a crush on a girl from 2nd to 8th grade that I still dream about her to this day, yet I doubt she ever gives me a second thought, much like Autumn
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Julianne227 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing! 
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013   Writer
thank you so much :heart:
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is insanely good...I have no words...
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013   Writer
oh wow, thank you so much :rose: glad you enjoyed to the point of speech impediment! haha
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, still searching for words...
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013   Writer
you'll find them, no worries :aww:
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I guess I just love love love the concept and I wish I had thought of it lol.
 
he was haunted by someone intangible
and spring
forever searched
for her replacement
in a world that did not offer one

I think spring is my favorite overall

she wrote in cursive
but spoke in chimes
and her cheeks were 
forever the color of
a weathered cabernet.

Amazing stanza

Just a great flow...I enjoyed every second of reading it
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013   Writer
haha i think i just got lucky with a good concept to be honest! thank you though.

and you're honestly too kind, glad you liked it :rose: xx
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Looking forward to reading more
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013   Writer
sure thing!
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Mint22 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
Where is the favorite button when you need it?!
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013   Writer
this made me smile. sorry for the incredibly late reply but you're too sweet and i am so glad you enjoyed it :aww: xx
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ComicyArtistia Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Student General Artist
Three words: This is art.

I truly love your prose, and the way you write. I would like to see more, if you can :)
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momo-madness Featured By Owner May 25, 2013   Writer
you are absolutely lovely, and flatter me beyond belief! i am so pleased you enjoyed my work! :rose:
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miserabel Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sentimental? Yes. Sad? Oh, yes. Beautiful all the same? YES.
A lovely, lovely piece of poetry, really it is. :love:
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013   Writer
aw this comment made me smile :heart: thank you so much for your kind words, i am so glad you enjoyed the piece enough to comment!

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miserabel Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure~ :hug:
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013   Writer
:heart:
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ocean-whispers Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013   Writer
You have been featured here: [link] :heart:
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013   Writer
you are too sweet, thank you so much :love:
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SpiritDuchess Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Simple sojourn of delight. thank you.
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013   Writer
thank YOU for reading it and leaving such a lovely comment. :heart:
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ocean-whispers Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013   Writer
Oh my gosh, this is beautiful.

"everybody called her summer
because she had golden eyes
and she had as many freckles
as the stars in the sky."


Absolutely perfect rhythm and alliteration. And your imagery is fabulous.
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013   Writer
aw thank you so much love :hug: i am so glad you enjoyed this piece! it is one of my personal favorites (:
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azazelin Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
how sad. :c
and very personal indeed
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013   Writer
yes quite :c
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Rain-kissed-drops Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you inspired this, [link] :huggle:
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012   Writer
you are literally the sweetest. :rose:
i hope you like my comment on your lovely work ♥ ♥ ♥
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Rain-kissed-drops Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:huggle::heart:
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Niufox Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
If I weren't in school right now, I'd cry. ;A;
So cute and sad... :happycry:
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012   Writer
aw thank you love :aww: you're so sweet!
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Meggie272 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I quite like this - some of the language used in building up the characters of the seasons was beautiful. :D
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012   Writer
aw thank you so much love! so glad you liked it :aww:
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DamagedHomewrecker Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is amazingggggggggggggggg so stunning and captures the personalities of the seasons so wonderfully; its fresh and unique and bursting with incredible imagery and i cant stop drinking this in i am soooo in love with this piece i cannot stop reading it ahhhh this is sooooo wonderful and beautiful seriously i love this!!!!!!!!!!
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012   Writer
aw this is so nice, thank you :rose: i am SO glad you enjoyed it! xx
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BatAshley Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I am completely in love with the line that says,
"he sprung branches of laughter
that tickled the clouds."
All the imagery is just so good and really very clever, but in a way that adds to the understanding of each character. Very well done, this is a work of art. (:
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012   Writer
aw you're the best. :huggle:
i am so glad you enjoyed it love! it means the world ♥
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Rain-kissed-drops Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This literally took my breath away, Momo. How do you always know how to captivate me with your words, especially in the first line. Each stanza was beyond heart-wrenching, because I can relate to every single one. I could feel each of the seasons coming out and personifying an actual human which is just unbelievably gorgeous. Every stanza was my favorite, and I can't pick just one...seriously. THIS is the best thing you've ever written in my opinion. It's just too phenomenal to put into words. :heart:
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012   Writer
literally made me cry. you are the BEST. i am so so glad you enjoyed it, i had a lot of fun writing it! it's comments like these that make writing poetry worthwhile, i swear. love you to the moon and back :rose: :rose:
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Rain-kissed-drops Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
iloveyoutoo. :heart:
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012   Writer
:rose: :rose:
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Onakuru Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
And they say French is the language of love...

That very well may be true when lovers are talking to one another, but when it comes to tell stories about it English is quite a thing. Ah. Maybe it's just because I'm a non-native speaker.

I think I'm going to like much of your work.
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012   Writer
wow, this is quite the compliment :rose: what an honor, i am so pleased you enjoyed yourself, especially since english is not your first language.<3 it's a pleasure to have you read my work ♥
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TheMoorMaiden Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is just gorgeous. :heart: If you have a spare moment could you send me some of your talent in the post please? :P

I love the lines:

his voice dripped nectar
into the ears of virgins.


I adore the way you characterised each season; they were all so believable and such charming characters. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, lovely work!
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012   Writer
only if we do a swap of talent, because you've got quite the supply yourself! :rose:

and thank you so much love, you are so sweet. i am so flattered that you enjoyed it :love:
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TheMoorMaiden Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome. :D
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CM-Night-Creature Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it.
It's so sad and sweet at the same time. The way that they each look foreward for love, but never think of looking for once behind them. If they did they'd see how much that person loves them, but that won't work either. Autum would like Summer who's in pain for Spring, who wants Winter, who watched Autum in silence.
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012   Writer
no, it will never work out, but i think that's the beauty of it. they will forever be pining for love which they do not realize they already possess. ♥

so glad you enjoyed the piece! :hug:
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