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Eremitik Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
What stands out about this piece, besides your wonderful imagery, is how sometimes we find wisdom where we least expect it.
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:iconmomo-madness:
momo-madness Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013   Writer
you are infinitely sweet :heart:
and yes, i agree! we often find things where we least expect it, but always when we need it most.
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Eremitik Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
well, thank you, but i think i am not being sweet so much as honest in what i think of your work.
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013   Writer
well, that means even more. :blushes:
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:iconeremitik:
Eremitik Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
;)
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Vainamoinenian Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This was so beautiful! "The lantern eyes", "eyes followed my spine through the crowd"... I just can't get enough of your writing! :D 
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:iconmomo-madness:
momo-madness Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013   Writer
aww thank you so much :heart::heart: it means the world to me :]
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Vainamoinenian Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
=) my pleasure
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:iconmomo-madness:
momo-madness Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013   Writer
:love:
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fervvent Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i came here to see which poem you were talking about and as it turns out i already have it favourited. :heart: it's lovely
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:iconmomo-madness:
momo-madness Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013   Writer
what a lovely surprise :heart::heart: thank you so much love! you are the sweetest :blush:
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fervvent Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
awe no you are :heart: you're welcome
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013   Writer
:iconsuperheroglompplz:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013   General Artist
Terrific tearjerker :giggle: :heart:
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:iconmomo-madness:
momo-madness Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013   Writer
thank you so much :rose: xx it means the world coming from you!
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013   General Artist
awwh! you are far too lovely and absjsjhdsbsjd i just wish i could jump outta my screen and :tighthug: you! :heart:
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momo-madness Featured By Owner May 2, 2013   Writer
the feeling is mutual, love :iconsuperheroglompplz:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner May 6, 2013   General Artist
:iconpinkheartsplz:
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:iconflummo:
flummo Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Student Writer
"because people need to believe that
they have someone or something
to come home to"


Yes. :heart:
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013   Writer
:rose::rose:
:aww:
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arabesque-o Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Student Photographer
this is subtly touching and well written.
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:iconmomo-madness:
momo-madness Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013   Writer
thank you so much :rose: it means so much coming from such a lovely writer
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imaginative-lioness Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I have featured this piece in my journal: [link]
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:iconmomo-madness:
momo-madness Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013   Writer
wow! what an honor :rose: thank you so much for displaying my work with equally talented writers :]
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7Demented Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it! You do need to work on capitalization, though.
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013   Writer
Thank you! :aww: My choice of no capitalization is a personal preference, however. As I believe my work is less formal and essentially just my thoughts vomited onto paper, I choose not to use capitalization in my poetry. However, as demonstrated in this comment, I know how to use capitalization just fine. To each their own, though. :heart:
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7Demented Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I guess. Nice job anyways!
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013   Writer
Thank you! (:
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brietta-a-m-f Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I haven't ridden a train since I was too young to remember, but this reminded me of a cross-country bus trip. (Circumstances were very different, and I did buy a both ways ticket.) This was beautifully written, and I feel like it makes you think about everything and nothing all at once.
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013   Writer
i too have not ridden on a train in forever! and cross-country bus trip? that sounds super exciting! (i'm glad you did :aww:) thank you so much for your lovely comment and i am so glad it evoked that bizarre feeling of everything/nothing in you. ♥
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brietta-a-m-f Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You meet lots of...interesting...people on buses. Not sure if I want to repeat it, but it is something I believe everyone should experience at least once. (Especially writers.)

And I could not have written a lovely comment unless there were a lovely piece to write it about!
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013   Writer
haha, i agree with that sentiment. and yes, it provides a lot of inspiration that's for sure!

you are too sweet :aww:
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imaginative-lioness Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this. I love the character and the story that you have created, it is a beautiful read. The way you have pulled together all these words is wonderfully done - my favourite part of this piece of poetry would have to be the following:

there were times and dates
prices and logos
but all i saw was my house
my family
and everything i used to love
because people need to believe that
they have someone or something
to come home to

i turned around to face those lantern eyes.


It was such a beautiful way to end this piece. It leaves me wondering, however I am completely satisfied with the ending ♥
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013   Writer
what a beautiful comment from an equally beautiful writer. i am so honored that you enjoyed my work and i read this comment twice before responding. you definitely put a smile on my face, and it means the world coming from someone with equal, arguably more, talent in writing ♥

thank you for the kind words :rose:
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imaginative-lioness Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are incredily welcome, I strongly believe that this is an amazing piece of work ♥ And thank-you so much for your kind words :)
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013   Writer
you are too kind :rose: and you're very welcome as well!
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ashwithfrenchfries Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it fascinates me about the things people see in the transport industry. especially a taxi driver: taking a last passenger before shifts end, seeing him drunk silly but glances from the rearview mirror the way he looks out the window. it's kind of humbling to think about the amount of lives that simply passes by us and never to be seen again but yet experience a magnitude almost equal to our own. that's the feeling i get from this poem. hehehe anyway thank you for the poem!
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013   Writer
yes definitely. i think, at the same time, it's quite alarming. sometimes i feel as though i need to stop and take a moment to just appreciate the world. appreciate each stranger that passes me and the fact that each of them has a family, a job, and above all, a story. we are all individuals and yet we belong to the same species. it fascinates me to know that there are people all over the world who are living, breathing and experiencing the same things as me. however, i feel like if i spend too much time on this subject, my head will just burst! it's definitely a lot to take in.

anyways, thank you for the thoughtful comment as always :love:
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ashwithfrenchfries Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ugh i have a thing for stories about public transport, don't mind me.
the confinement and solitude of a lonely person in a train or taxi is an emotion i love to explore, i actually find it quite romantic.

again, my absolute pleasure, love! ^^
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013   Writer
haha i agree! it's quite wonderful. :heart:
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katarthis Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol. Surprise!

A very quick and lovely trip.

k
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013   Writer
Thank you very much :aww:
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Cionie Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Professional General Artist
I just love this! It reminds me of my own time spent in train stations and wondering if I'd ever see that particular station again :)
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013   Writer
yes, it's quite reminiscent, huh? :aww: thank you so much, and i am so pleased that you liked it :hug:
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rlkirkland Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Strong emotions well paced. :heart:
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:iconmomo-madness:
momo-madness Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013   Writer
wow, thank you so much! :love: it means a lot coming from someone as talented as you!
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rlkirkland Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:dalove:
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jade-pandora Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
beautiful even :heart:
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:iconmomo-madness:
momo-madness Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013   Writer
you are too sweet, thank you ♥
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jade-pandora Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
:iconlovelyheartsplz:
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